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The pain I have
The emptiness I feel
The way I live
Is it real?
Do you care about what I go through?
Do you ever think about what I put up with?
Do you care?
Do you feel the pain at all?
Do you ever have to deal with the people
Who say we shouldn’t be together
Who say we should give up
And not care any more
All I need is for you to feel it too
I need you to feel some pain
All you have to feel
Is half of the pain I have
All I need is one tear
One tear to show that you can care
All I need is one moment where you feel my pain
The pain I have with how much I care about you
All I need is
For you to know
That what I felt
Was something beyond comprehension
I need you to feel the pain I feel
Just to prove that you care
Just to prove that you are real
So that I can be satisfied
©2005-2010 ~rightkindofwrong
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Author's Comments

A poem that I wrote while I was at school in health class and was thinking about someone...We were doing a unit on relationships and it got me thinking a little.... I do a lot of writing in that class... but o well... I don't really like it but I decided to post it anyway... I think it sucks but o well

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*Raven-sky Jun 18, 2005, 12:39:54 PM
very good .. i can relate too... feling the same way .. but yah it's awsome .. wat r u doing saying it sux u silly person ... ha ha ha .. but yah im adding it to my favs

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~rightkindofwrong Jun 20, 2005, 5:12:56 PM
lol well thanx

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"It's better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not!"
Help somebody, by Van Zant
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~tisbabygirl04 Jun 15, 2005, 5:37:47 PM
that doesn't suck!!! did you write that in the journal....cuz i think that i might have read that one before!!

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~rightkindofwrong Jun 15, 2005, 5:48:59 PM
yea maybe....I don't remember... o well

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"It's better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not!"
Help somebody, by Van Zant
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~Darling0137 May 21, 2005, 5:49:44 PM
It sounds like something I have heard spoken to me time and time again
I can relate to this far too easy

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~rightkindofwrong May 21, 2005, 5:54:55 PM
yea it is creepy....

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"It's better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not!"
Help somebody, by Van Zant
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~shanninigans May 18, 2005, 11:54:40 AM
great job

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~rightkindofwrong May 18, 2005, 1:06:26 PM
Am I supposed to say thank you to that?? Well I can't tell.... but thanx... I guess...

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"It's better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not!"
Help somebody, by Van Zant
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~shanninigans May 18, 2005, 2:18:51 PM
?Did I say something wrong? I thought it was good... I liked it a lot

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If you love animals be sure to check out the club that is all about animals ~ILoveAnimals
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~rightkindofwrong May 18, 2005, 3:10:59 PM
lol its ok nvm.... it was my mistake.

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"It's better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not!"
Help somebody, by Van Zant
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